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Post by jdogdavis on Feb 3, 2013 15:47:38 GMT -5
Steam Name: Jdogdavis1
What brought you to our server?After trying 5 servers they did not suit me but after playing your server I just could not stop playing.Your server is the best i played so for.
Past Hl2rp and or vortigaunt experience?I have played Hl2rp for about 2 years.I have been playing with vorts for 1 year but no experience, but i learn fast.
Back-story of your vortigaunt character: Los'Denk was born on his home world when the combine took hem and his dad Los'Backen and put to work on the streets, but when the cps found out that his dad was helping the humans in secret that had him killed on the spot. Los'Denk found out that his dad was killed 1 week later. Los'Denk has only memory's of his dad now. He has wanted to escape the slave world and want to help the people like his father has to others, but Los'Denk has been so mistreated for so long that he has loss hope in humanity and only wants to get home.
A short few sentences on what your vortigaunt does on a daily basis (before or after being freed): Los'Denk works on the street cleaning up blood, trash, and bodies. After being freed Los'Denk only wants to help people to the best of his ability and training to use his powers better.
CREATE NEW ONE WITH NEW FORMAT - Make a new app if you still want to be a vort. I stepped up the requirements, and I won't let one slip by on a technicality.
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Post by jdogdavis on Feb 5, 2013 7:47:43 GMT -5
Steam Name: Jdogdavis1
What brought you to our server?:After trying 5 servers they did not suit me but after playing your server I just could not stop playing.Your server is the best i played so for.
Past Hl2rp and or vortigaunt experience?:I have played Hl2rp for about 2 years.I have been playing with vorts for 1 year but no experience, but i learn fast.
Back-story of your vortigaunt character: Los'Denk was born on his home world. Los'Denk was training to be a worrier ,when the combine took him and his dad Los'Backen and put to work on the streets in city 14.The city was in bad shape before. Los'Denk and his dad Los'Benk where in charge of cleaning up and building the nexus in 2037 April 12.
Los'Denk's dad was use as a medic for is healing power,he was good at healing gun shot wounds. Los'Benk was all was mistreated, but never showed it in front of the combine, not even Los'Denk because he was afraid of him trying to rise up and save his dad. Los'Denk found out when he saw his dad get hit 5 times.June 14 2039
Los'Benk was shoot and killed in 2039 after the combie found out he was healing humans. Los'Benk final words where for them to never tell his son. But word flow fast because the humans lost a doc. Los'Denk found about his dads death 2 weeks later on June 27 2039. After finding out about his dads death, Los'Denk vowed to learn to healing power and help people who need it. But the combine saw Los'Denk trying to use his power , they throw hi in a holding cell where they wiped him 50 time. But had to stop because a few more wipes he would have died. After that Los'Denk lost hope for all his hope for his dream and his hope for humanity.
A short few sentences on what your vortigaunt does on a daily basis (before or after being freed): Los'Denk works on the street cleaning up blood, trash, and bodies. After being freed Los'Denk only wants to help people to the best of his ability and training to use his powers better.
50 lines of dialogue between your vortigaunt and anything else: 1 Los'denk says: Dad why are we just sitting here. 2 Los'Benk says: Because something will come up soon. *Los'Denk gets up and starts to jump around* 3 Los'Benk says: Son stop jumping around and sit down. 4 Los'Denk says: But dad i don't want to. 5 Los'Benk says: If you ever want to be a worrier then you will need to follow what some one tells you to do. 6 Los'Denk says: Ok. 7 Los'Benk says: Wait what is that noise. (The ground starts to shake) 7 Los'Benk yells: Get is side now! 8 Los'Denk says: But why? 9 Los'Benk says: Just do it! Los'Denk runs the home* *Los'Benk does the same* 10 Los'Denk says: What is going on? 11 Los'Benk says: I don't know. 12 Los'Denk says: Are we going to be ok? 13 Los'Benk says: I don't know. *Combine breaks down the door*14 Los'Benk and Los'Denk yell: Ahhhhhhh! 15 Combine says: Get up and follow me or die. *Los'Denk and Los'Benk get up and follow the man* 16 Los'Denk says: Who are you? 17 Combine says: Shut up. 18 Los'Benk says: You cant say that to my son. *Combine hits him in the gut and drags him* 19 Los'Denk yells: DAD! *Los'Denk follows them* *Los'Denk runs after them* *Los'Benk gets thrown on a space ship* *Los'Denk jumps on space ship* 20 Los'Denk says: Dad are you ok? 21 Los'Benk says: Ya. Combine yells: Everyone shut up! (3 days later) 22 Combine yells: Everyone off! *Los'Denk and Los'Benk gets off* 23 Apex yells: Everyone welcome to your new home, Earth. Apex says: Everybody that is younger then 12 step out of line. 24 Los'Denk says:That was close. 25 Los'Benk says:Ya. 26 Apex says:All of you that are not in line follow the combine in red and black. 27 Apex says:The rest of you get on a train as fast as you can. *Apex grabs Los'Benk* 28 Apex says: Not you, you are staying. 29 Los'Benk says:What why. 30 Apex says:Because we need you for the building of the nexus. 31 Los'Benk says:Well can my son stay ere with me. 31 Los'Denk says:Please. 32 Apex says:Fine but you will need to work hard. 33 Los'Denk says:Thank you. 34 Los'Benk says:Yes thank you. 35 Apex says:Ok, you two will work on the building of the nexus. 36 Los'Denk says: Anything else. 37 Apex says: Ya, you will raise the young vorts. 38 Los'Denk says:Ok but can i ask you something. 39 Apex says:What. 40 Los'Denk says:Why did you take us from our home? 41 Apex says:Because we needed someone to d our work. 42 Apex says:Pules We heard that you guys have the powers. 43 Los'Denk says:So we are your slaves. 44 Apex says:Yes. 45 Los'Benk says:You cant do that. 46 Apex says:We just did, now shut up or you will get shoot. 47 Apex says:Go start working and don't talk. 48 Los'Denk says:Yes sir. 49 Los'Benk says:Yes sir. 50 Apex says:Well, why are you just standing here. Go. DENIED - Grammar and repetition of unnecessary words. Run on sentences. 50 lines of dialogue must each have their own lines. 50 lines don't have correct usage of /me's. Vortigaunts do not speak that way. Backstory timeline is incorrect. The 7 Hour War was in 2014, the current time is 2016, Gordon arrived in 2018, and therefore the backstory cannot surpass the year 2016 in order to follow canon. You may reapply in one week. |
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Post by The Machine on Feb 14, 2013 10:39:05 GMT -5
Steam Name: Volt
What brought you to our server?: I was looking for a server that did not allow minges to ruin it for others.
Past Hl2rp and or vortigaunt experience?: 2 years of HL2RP and a month or so as a vort
Back-story of your Vortigaunt character(4 paragraphs minimum, along with immaculate grammar):
Las'Guff was a survivor of the combine invasion of the home world and fled to Xen with the other remaining Vortigaunts. Las'Guff trained on Xen to use his powers to help others and avoid using them to hurt, but then the Black Mesa incident happened and Las'Guff, as ordered by Nihilanth, fled into the rift and down to Earth.
Once through the rift Las'Guff was scared. Las'Guff followed the other Vortigaunts around this new world. Then gun shots were fired. The two Vortigaunts he has followed engaged the people firing while Las'Guff fled in the other direction. He ran in till the gun shots could no longer be heard. A scared and frightened scientist ran around the corner and into Las'Guff. With out thinking Las'Guff attacked the scientist. Two swipes to the face and the scientist was dead. Las'Guff afraid even more now started communicating with his brothers and sisters.
Las'Guff was a lucky one who managed to escape Black Mesa. He went into hiding in till the seven hour war took place.
During the seven hour was Las'Guff remained in the sewers. Too scared to go out side. Then he heard an explosion from further down the sewers. Las'Guff went and investigated. He found that two humans has come through the hole in the wall and were injured. Las'Guff watched from the shadows. Then as he stepped out to show him self four combine entered the sewers from the hole. They show the two humans dead and then they heard Las'Guff moving. Las'Guff cried out to them not to shoot, and they didn't. The next thing he knew he was on a ship.
Las'Guff awoke some time later on a ship. Strange soldiers were surrounding him placing plates of metal on to him. Las'Guff went to attack one of the soldiers but could not move. He heard laughter from some where else near by. His eyes filled with terror as more and more bits of metal were place onto him. Las'Guff starting to talk but then saw a baton of some sort come down on his head. He then woke up some time later, coming out of some sort of machine. He was then transported to a city with solders. A soldier said to him "Welcome to your new home." Scared and confused Las'Guff nodded his head.
One paragraph on what your Vortigaunt does on a daily basis (before or after being freed):
Las'Guff awaits orders from his masters in the nexus lobby. If he is told to clean he cleans with out a moan, he might moan in his mind but not out loud. He will try to use his powers when no one is looking but this to no avail. He will also ask units if there is anything they would like cleaned like shoes or maybe graffiti.
50 lines of dialogue between your vortigaunt and anything else(must include proper use of /me's and speech):
/it A train rolls into the station and a bunch of citizens get off and stand where they are told.
(Las'Guff)/me Carries a mob and bucket and cleans the platform off.
/it Screams can be heard in the back ground.
<:: Biotec. Clean up this mess
Las'Guff: Yes master.
(Lass'Guff)/me Continues cleaning the platform.
(MPF unit) /me Flick on his baton
<:: I said... clean up this mess
(MPF unit) /me Points to the blood on the wall and floor
Las'Guff: Yes master..... Sorry master.
(Las'Guff)/me Carries his mob and bucket to the blood on the floor and wall
<:: We need this wall cleaned before the next citizens arrive
Las'Guff: Yes master.
(Las'Guff)/me While cleaning the blood wonders what it would be like to be freed
/it They citizens walk out of the train station, some stare at the vort, they all leave more foot prints.
(Citizen)/me Walks up to the creature
Citizen: Hello creature.
(Las'Guff)/me Looks up at the man for a second before looking back down at what he is cleaning
<:: Citizen! Move along.
(Citizen)/me Turns and nods and the unit before walking off.
<:: Once your done biotec clean this floor.
Las'Guff: Yes master.
<:: Good.
(MPF Unit)/me Turns and walks away but stays where he can see the vort
(Lass'Guff)/me Rings out the mob of blood.
/it Time passes
(MPF unit)/me Walks up to the vortigaunt
<:: Biotec. Go out side and clean sweep the streets.
(Las'Guff)/me Looks up and says "Yes master..."
(MPF unit)/me Smiles under his mask
(Las'Guff)/me Walks out of the train station and goes to nexus to collect a broom to brush the street
(Las'Guff)/me Collects a broom and walks back outside and goes to the MPF unit
Las'Guff: Master...Should I start?
(MPF unit)/me Stares at the vortigaunt before nodding
(Las'Guff)/me Starts to sweep the streets
(MPF unit)/me Smiles under mask and stands in a muddy puddle
<:: Biotec, come clean of my boot.
(Las'Guff)/me Yes master.
(MPF unit)/me As the vortigaunt walks over he flicks his boot and sprays the vort in mud
Las'Guff: Sorry master...
(MPF unit)/me Grunts and hands the vortigaunt a an old rag
(Las'Guff)/me Takes the rag and begins to clean the MPF units boot.
/it Citizens walk past the unit and the vort
(Las'Guff) Finished master.
<:: Good. Now then...
(MPF unit)/me Thinks for a few seconds
(Las'Guff)/me Stares at the unit
/it Something is said over the radio
(MPF unit):/radio Yes m'am. Right away.
(MPF unit)/me Smiles at the vort and says "You needed inside nexus."
ACCEPTED (I guess) - Speak to an admin in game.
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